This is my audition piece for Touchstone theatre. I would really appreciate it if you could tell me what you think, what can be improved, and if you have any other ideas. It so happens that I have a little bit more time to send something than I thought so this might not be the final thing. There's still space for improvement!
So, don't be polite. Tell me what you think .
You theatre people out there - you know who you are - please give me pointers!
You bi-national people - you also know who you are - if you feel like sharing some 'bi-cultural anecdotes' that you wouldn't mind I used, then go for it!